Genna, I LOVE "patrol the world." Continue with that metaphor throughout the poem, using images that personify the wind as someone who patrols--a soldier, a police officer, or even a parent. Make a couple changes and post again . . . this is getting exciting!
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Genna, I LOVE "patrol the world." Continue with that metaphor throughout the poem, using images that personify the wind as someone who patrols--a soldier, a police officer, or even a parent. Make a couple changes and post again . . . this is getting exciting!
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